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Be My Dream by ~tearsfornothing:icontearsfornothing:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Fixed


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I miss the time where we could talk forever
Hold me close as the hours pass by
Laughing at the landscapes pulling my mind
The dish ran away with the spoon
As we walked through the emptiness
We sang the song from yesterday's hope

I miss you, I see you, I hear you
Listening for your heart close to mine.
Two steps, and your touch dizzies my mind
Drive me crazy, babe, one more time.
And so, sweetest friend, I hear the scream
For your touch, be my dreams.

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©2007-2009 ~tearsfornothing
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Author's Comments

A good friend of mine helped me write this.
Otherwise I'd still be in no can write limbo. >.<
It's not that great, but here's to randomness!
My music player loves me.
I was listening to a few songs, and thought
'How could you summarize all these?'
And here you go.
Aren't you glad I wasn't listening to Metallica? :P

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~Shinart Jun 1, 2007, 10:38:59 PM
Good idea ;p

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:star-empty: The most beautiful thing we have in common is our difference. :star-empty:
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~zo-i Jun 1, 2007, 11:02:46 PM
You write so beautifully. I cant wait to see more of your work! (:
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~tearsfornothing Jun 1, 2007, 11:42:20 PM
Aw. ^_^ Well thank you! :hug:

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The Brain: So, you sacked the cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker?
Mr. Sackett: The second cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker I've sacked since the sixth sitting sheet slitter got sick.
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~tearsfornothing Jun 1, 2007, 11:42:32 PM
:lol: Thanks you ^_^

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The Brain: So, you sacked the cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker?
Mr. Sackett: The second cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker I've sacked since the sixth sitting sheet slitter got sick.
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Mood: Joy =brandstifterin Jun 4, 2007, 1:41:53 PM
That's really well written, I love the incorporation of the nursery rhyme to add almost an innocence :D
*fav's*

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46,145 steps to heaven?!

Could he daily feel a stab of hunger for her and find nourishment in the very sight of her? I think so. But would she see through the bars of his plight and ache for him?
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~tearsfornothing Jun 4, 2007, 1:48:19 PM
Thank you :hug: I wrote it for a very good friend of mine. ^_^

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The Brain: So, you sacked the cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker?
Mr. Sackett: The second cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker I've sacked since the sixth sitting sheet slitter got sick.
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=brandstifterin Jun 4, 2007, 2:03:55 PM
No doubt they are very proud to have that written about them, it's very well written

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46,145 steps to heaven?!

Could he daily feel a stab of hunger for her and find nourishment in the very sight of her? I think so. But would she see through the bars of his plight and ache for him?
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~tearsfornothing Jun 4, 2007, 8:10:03 PM
Aw. ^_^ Thank you ! :glomp: I've been trying to write more >.< Any ideas, or got anything you want me to write about ( ideas, pictures you've done? Anything at all? lol ) My mind has been drawing a bit of a blank. I'm not censored so much anymore, since my girlfriend isn't my girlfriend and she's not going through my stuff all the time. o.o

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The Brain: So, you sacked the cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker?
Mr. Sackett: The second cocky khaki Kicky Sack sock plucker I've sacked since the sixth sitting sheet slitter got sick.
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