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It's the edge of silence.
Moving past my mind
Just drawn to your essence
Please just sit tight.. sit still.

A frenzy of movement.
A hop to the left behind my eyes
Stop moving, the flower is crying
And watch the clouds in your heart
©2007-2009 ~tearsfornothing
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meh. It's just too quickly written

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:iconrosinangel:
I like it, i really do.
The natural movement of someone on your mind.
Spontaneity; the truth with no inhibitions to reconsider itself.
:)

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Thank you! ^_^ I just wanted to write, and asked someone for a word. And this is what I got from it.

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I likey! but try switching "still" with a word like "tight"... not sure if it'll change the meaning of what you wish to say, but "tight" adds a better fluid motion to the words.

at least, that is my opinion, REGUARDLESS, I love it ^_^

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